Yeah. I worked kinda hard on the first panel because... well I was bored and I thought I could continue doing the same amount of shades+detail on the other panels. Nope. Fail.
LOL ANYWAY. THIS IS A TRUE STORY!! It was SO. SCARY. I was tempted to go kick one of their legs to see if it would turn to dust... but decided against it. LOL
It's kinda interesting though... They're really weird. (I'm just not used to it rofl I've got thunder thighs )
I hope you can read my hand writing. XD Read left to right. Like normal.
Oh. Yeah the gambling thing was this coin game. You buy these tokens and put them into a slot that go into the case, and push the other coins over. If you get a prize coin, you can get a smaller prize. If you get two, you get a bigger prize. It's super hard and it keeps looking like you're almost at a jackpot of coins, when really it just screws you over. ROFL
Me and Tim are SUCH SUCKERS for that game! We scream when we run out of money. LOLOLOL. IT'S SO FUN *CRIES*
ahahaha! that's really freaky...I think curvy legs are much prettier. ^^ I bet seeing that would have made me shiver. I don't like skinny jeans as it is and most people that I see with skinny jeans aren't skinny so...D: I don't know which is worse. All the expressions are priceless, especially the first in the second panel and the last one. I dunno why, but I just had this thought, "Man, she's gonna be good" I mean, your style is so unique and you just keep getting better and better and...y'know?!
I'd critique it, but it seems more like a quick comic thing that you did to tell a story :3
Hehe, you're welcome ^_______^ Well, have you found any?
In that case: In the second panel, the girl's shoulders on the left look really pointy; almost sharp. Also I can't tell who the character in the second panel is. (not the girls) And your right shoulder (that is you in the last panel, right?) looks like it's protruding a bit too much. Other than that it's lovely; you're really great at expressions!
I know! D: There's only a few girls at my school that really go to that extent, but for some reason it looks good on them. Good thing it's only like, 3.
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I'd critique it, but it seems more like a quick comic thing that you did to tell a story :3
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Oh, thank you!! <3
I guess it's unique. I've been trying to find a style similar to mine and be like ' Haha, I'm a loooseer! '
I wasn't really expecting critique. XD But it'd be nice~
*glomp*
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Smiley faces, rainbows, and unicorns, BITCH!
Hehe, you're welcome ^_______^ Well, have you found any?
In that case: In the second panel, the girl's shoulders on the left look really pointy; almost sharp. Also I can't tell who the character in the second panel is. (not the girls) And your right shoulder (that is you in the last panel, right?) looks like it's protruding a bit too much. Other than that it's lovely; you're really great at expressions!
D: Its so weird and...scary. There were so many girls like that at my school. XD This comic made me lol. GOOD JOB. : D
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Smash forehead on keyboard to continue.
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My fantasy comic!!! [link]
My emo-suicidal-gothic-thingy comic![link])
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NO! WRONG! I SAID IT'S;
Smiley faces, rainbows, and unicorns, BITCH!
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